Delightful-- I genuinely laughed out loud at the Billy Squire bit. I actually considered using The Stroke as Dan's level music in my game but wondered if that would cause issues with streaming it (I looked it up and it depends on who owns the song and if they enforce it and that kind of stuff and... Billy Squire's gotta be broke, right?)
You should have put the holographic Ryan head in your thumbnail
"You ponder what could have been as you approach the elevator." might be my favorite line in any choose your own adventure I've ever read.